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I know you just used the stupid carsales template but ABS brakes don't "keep you at a safe distance". They stop the car from skidding while braking.
This sentence needs a comma or doesn't need the word "finally".
Finally this car has rear vision / reversing camera and leather steering wheel.
Maybe explain what the optional packages include?
one part of ad says 17" rims, another 18" tyres
the shopping list of accessories won't mean much to 95% of purchasers and will put a lot of them off. Maybe explain the features and benefits better? my Uncle was one of the most successful car marketers in Australia and he always told me that you sell the sizzle, not the sausage. he also said to not mention minor mods / accessories until the buyer came to look and then surprise them by pointing out the extras you hadn't already mentioned.
I think the pool of buyers has been reduced as it's quite a unique vehicle but when you do get someone to look you'll get a sale.carandimage The place where Off-Topic is On-Topic
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